A Venerable Old Man [Classic] (300 word story)

Written in high school. Not very sophisticated or exciting — I’d like to think my writing has improved over the years…


Five or six years ago, northeast of the town I used to live in, a few of my friends and I went to visit an old man who used to live at the edge of the woods. I don’t believe that any of us knew his name, nor he ours — we just called him ‘sir’ and he called us ‘boys’ — but every Friday after school the four of us would meet by the railroad tracks and set off on our weekly hike to the old man’s house.

It was easy to get away from town, because the town was laid out along the river in the middle of the valley — and just a little bit of hill climbing brought us to virgin woods that could have been miles and miles from the nearest community.

I believe the word ‘venerable’ would have fitted the old man perfectly because he was very old and knowledgeable, and we respected him and his stories a lot.

He told us of his ancestors, and about the legends of the hills — and he had that quality when speaking that made all of his stories interesting, and we never wanted to go home.

One visit about five or six years ago brought us to his house, but he was not on the porch awaiting us like he usually was. We searched his house and found his kettle on the fire like it always was when we visited — containing some of his homemade tea — but there was no sign of him.

We came back every Friday for a few months, and then slacked off to about one visit every couple of months. We never saw him again, and gave up after a year, but I think his memory will always stay in my mind.

Sabotage [Classic] (1200 word story)

From my youth. I’m convinced one of my siblings ‘wrapped up’ this story for me. There is some handwriting that isn’t mine — plus an abrupt, typed, silly ending. I’ve therefore titled this post ‘Sabotage’.


The four young brothers stared solemnly at each other across the heavy oaken table. They were two sets of twins, born less than a year apart. Meredith was the oldest of the four, older than his twin Evan by a few minutes. This appeared to be the case for Meredith was the only one of the four to have a beard, made even more striking by its coloring, the blackest of blacks. This beard in no way made him appear sinister — for the innocent blue of his eyes and the light color of his skin made him seem an angel or a shepherd boy — in spite of his serious mouth. Evan had curly red hair, far-set green eyes, and a laughing face. He was the largest of the four as was Meredith the smallest. The younger set of twins, Lionel and Randal, looked very much the same with their solid build, sandy-blond hair, and deep brown eyes. It was not uncommon for even old acquaintances to confuse the identities of the two. The younger twins were thought of more as “The Twins” than their older brothers who, though bearing a notable family resemblance, seemed to look nothing alike when compared to their brothers’ similarity.

All four brothers appeared younger than their years, though all were remarkably athletic; each far outshining his peers in swordsmanship and horsemanship. There seemed no end to their ability to master the skills of war as well as the incredible feats of acrobatics displayed by the traveling troops that visit the kingdom every few years.

They were handsome young men and seemed to be the sons of some god. They did, in fact, have noble blood — for their father was the beloved brother of the king, and their mother possibly the most beautiful woman in the whole kingdom which, in itself, covered hundreds of square miles. They had grown to manhood in the royal castle — a sprawling building of white marble — and it was in an upper room in the castle that they discussed the recent disappearance of their beautiful mother.

“Now, who was the last to see her?” Meredith, taking natural charge.

“A kitchen girl saw her walking in the garden shortly after midday, and no one remembers seeing her after that.” This was Randal disclosing the findings of their afternoon search. “It would seem that she must have wandered off into the forest.”

“Then what are we doing here?” demanded Evan, already rising from his chair — willing to search the forest on his own.

“Calm down,” ordered Meredith, “Evan, always acting without thinking. That will get you into trouble someday.” This remark brought smiles from the twins and a mild look of warning from Evan as he reseated himself.

“We have to plan our course of action,” continued Meredith. “It would be dark by the time we got a search party organized — and besides, she may yet be in the castle even though our search showed nothing. She has enough sense to return to the castle at dusk.”

“Unless she’s hurt,” commented Randal. 

“Or abducted,” added Lionel, the more fanciful of the two.

“She may have grown tired and fallen asleep in one of the unoccupied lower sleeping chambers,” remarked Evan.

“Well, we’ll soon know — because the king should have completed a more thorough search of the castle any moment now,” stated Merdith.

Just then, a messenger burst into the room, in his haste forgetting to knock. “Your mother is not in the castle. The king is organizing a search party now, and he wishes…” The messenger was nearly knocked over as the four brothers rushed from the room.


They were met by their father and the king in the hall outside the council chamber. Both looked glum. It was the king who was first to speak.

“I want to tell you boys that this search is merely perfunctory. One of the gardeners saw your mother carried and taken off by a dragon and taken east.”

“Desmond!” exclaimed the twins in unison, naming the evil wizard whose castle was in the thickest part of the Eastern Forest.

“Exactly,” agreed the king, “the search of the nearby forest is only a precaution — but we have no better explanation for your mother’s disappearance.”

“You are old enough to decide for yourselves what you want to do.” their father told them.

Evan turned to the twins, “See to getting our horses saddled and provisioned. We’ll need…”

“It’s already been taken care of,” their father told them with a smile, “you may leave at once.”

After short thank-you’s and good-bye’s, the boys raced toward the stables.


After a full day of hard riding, the brothers found themselves at Desmond’s black castle at nightfall. They left the horses to forage for grass among the thorny underbrush, and abandoned the cover of the forest to approach the castle. The castle was tall and black, overgrown with ivy, and surrounded by a broad, murky moat in which occasional dark forms could be glimpsed. There was no drawbridge, nor any openings in the castle walls for twenty- five feet above the ground.

“First obstacle, the moat.” said Meredith as he tossed a stick out into the moat. As soon as the stick hit the water, there was a frenzied turmoil that increased until suddenly the commotion stopped and the stick was nowhere to be seen.

“Wow.” said Evan.

“Maybe we could fell a tree to act as a bridge.” again Evan.

Meredith replied, “It would take a day to cut down a tree large enough to span the moat — even if we had the proper tools.”

“We could jump.” commented Lionel, “Around the back of the castle to the left the moat’s not more than fifteen feet wide. We’ve all jumped more than that in practice.”

“We’ll just fling our swords across first to make it easier.” urged Randal.

Meredith considered, “It seems that we don’t have much choice.” So they started toward the left side of the castle.


After they had reached the narrow part of the moat, Meredith had them line up single file about ten feet from the launching point.

“We will all jump at the same time so if one falls in mid-air, we can catch him.”

All four brothers ran to the edge but, at the last moment, Meredith — who had been the last in line — tripped, toppling all four into the moat. There was a great disturbance in the water until all was finally still.

The last thing heard was the word “wow” as four heavenly bodies ascended to the sky.


The king, and his brother — who was the four brothers’ father, and the four brothers’ mother’s husband — committed harakiri and died.


Deep in the heart of the castle, the mother of the four brothers screamed and kicked as the evil dragon breathed hot breath on her. His looming face came closer and again she screamed.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!” she said as the huge lizard made her hair catch on fire.

Just then the evil Desmond entered the room and called the dragon away from her. He approached the woman and proceeded to slit open her throat with his long sharp fingernail. The blood gushed in slow motion, “PSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHH”.

“That will teach your meddling youngans,” he mumbled as he walked away to end the story.

Brain M [Classic] (400 word story)

Another very silly story (hopefully) written when I was quite young — probably around the same time as this other silly one.


The alien glanced about hastily. He couldn’t help feeling a little paranoid. After all, this was the first contact with this race and, as with all dealings with unknown races, no weaponry was permitted.

He had arrived shortly before sunrise, alone in a shuttlecraft that he had hidden in the treacherous crags of some mountains a few miles to the west. He then began hiking his way toward this settlement — which was in the foothills of another nearby range of mountains. About three miles from the village, he had been spotted by a band of hunters from the village — who had immediately lost interest in the hunt, and had gathered around him and examined him with curiosity. He was somewhat relieved at having been discovered — because, unarmed, he had little doubt that some of the local fauna could make short work of him.

He had a small knowledge of the local language, and got the idea from their conversation among themselves that they were taking him to someone named ‘Brain M’ — obviously some local intellect or philosopher who acted as a lawmaker. They had neglected to speak to him — possibly thinking that he could not understand. He then decided to keep quiet, and keep whatever advantage this secret knowledge would give him — however slight.

He had been taught to accept any strange appearance that another race may present, yet he found these beings somewhat repulsive, nonetheless — and they, undoubtedly, found him so also.

So he had been politely escorted to the village, and now found himself outside the abode of this ‘Brain M’. The men escorted him in, and he was mildly surprised to discover that this Brain M was a butcher — who was in the middle of cleaning and cutting up some small animal, and did not look up until he was done. It did make some sense that this person was a butcher — because it was entirely common for a leader to be some man of everyday importance in cultures of this technology.

Brain M walked toward the alien, absently carrying the heavy implement he had been using on the animal. They smiled at each other, and the alien’s guards stepped back — allowing room for the anticipated meeting. Time froze for an instant, as the first momentous meeting of the two races took place.

The men cried in unison, “Brain Em!” and the butcher’s tool came crashing down.

Then blackness.

Ambassador [Classic] (300 word story)

Why, Tom, why?? (written long, long ago…)


“This way, Mr. Phlegm…. Yes, that’s right, now follow this passage down to the end to exit. And get a move on — we can’t have this place congested with traffic… Good luck!”

Mr. Phlegm worked his way toward the exit. “This is going to be pretty easy,” he muttered, “I wonder why they didn’t do this sooner.” Suddenly a tremendous gust of air from behind him, and propelled him forward with hurricane force.

“What’s happening?” he cried, “they didn’t tell me about this!“ He heard a hollow laughter behind him as he found himself in a wet chamber being mauled by some incredibly strong worm-like creature. In the next instant, he was hurled forward — but this time he was blinded by an extremely bright light — and found himself plummeting toward the earth.

Thud.

He peered through the glare at the immense figure towering over him. “Don’t leave me here!” he pleaded — but the creature took a few steps, and was out of sight. Mr. Phlegm thought back to the terrible stories his mother had told him when he was young, and he began to cry… 


“Sweetheart… sweetheart,” Mr. Phlegm awoke to find himself being shaken by his lovely wife. “Wake up,” she said, “today is the big day.”

“I had this terrible nightmare,” he began, “I…” He saw the look of worry in his wife’s eyes that had been there ever since he had been chosen. “It was nothing,” he told her. 

“I will miss you darling.” They held one last embrace, and then he left. He rehearsed his speech on the way to the Center, where he was met by a pretty nurse — not too unlike the one in his dream.

“Good luck!” she cried after him, and watched the newly-elected Ambassador of the Left Lung make his way to the outside world.

The Search [Classic] (1500 word story)

Another story from freshman year of college. Since it has my name and a date, I assume I submitted it for a class. (It’s sad that it had a handful of misspellings…)


In the days before the rise and fall of Man, the Earth was young and green and abundant with animals and plants of all types. The Sun was warm, the winters kind, and all creatures lived in harmony with one another, including the People.

“The People were a glorious race — fair of feature and noble of deed. Their kind knew peace, and did not scar the World as the Men later did. When Man sprang into being, the People went into hiding — for they knew what had been written about the fate of Man…”

Gromer shifted uneasily on his haunches, his mind a mixture of confusion and frustration. This was the first year that his father had insisted that Gromer attend the Storyteller’s History — that was always related at the New Year. The men of Gromer’s tribe were roughly grouped around the Storyteller — whose desiccated face was illuminated by the dying fire.

Gromer tilted his bulbous head toward his father who squatted down beside him. “I don’t understand, Father,” he croaked through his misshapen mouth.

Without looking, his father backhanded him across the face and sent him sprawling. Gromer lifted his head groggily, and spat blood and one of his few remaining teeth. It was obvious that his father wanted Gromer to be quiet. Cowed, he crawled back and took his place.

“…the People had some contact with Man who called them the Fairyfolk or the Elvenkind.”

In truth, none of Gromer’s tribe, not even the Storyteller understood much of the History. The words, handed down by word of mouth for generations, had become merely sounds, though they were still an important and revered tradition.

“But, it is said, when Man destroyed himself and all the good things of the Earth — for which we curse him a thousand times — those that remained of the People after their long absence appeared again with plans to make the Earth green once more.

“It had been written long ago that, after the fall of Man, a girl-child was to be born among the People who was to be the key to restoring the Earth. She was to be called Allariana — the Key. A child as innocent as the dove, and as beautiful as the Dawn.

“So it is, that we wait for the coming of the Key — so that the Earth may be whole once more.”

The men were silent for a time as the Storyteller left the group and headed for his cave. Gromer left also, for his family’s cave, as the men began their loud evening boasting, bellowing, and belching. He stopped along the way to dig absently for grub — as the words of the Storyteller ran through his mind. He succeeded in snaring three of the white, thumb-sized larvae, and chewed them slowly as the warm juices ran down his chin. Gromer thought of Allariana. He could picture her with such clarity that he was filled with a strange longing he had never experienced before. He tried to imagine what it would be like to be one of the People — to breathe health, to be one with untainted nature — the likes of which Gromer has never seen. After finding a place to defecate, he continued toward his cave.

Inside, Gromer found his usual sleeping place worn smooth by years of use. Trying not to awaken his sisters and mother who had already retired, he curled up on his side and was soon asleep.

He awoke in the middle of the night from a vivid dream of Allariana, and discovered the need to wash himself. The moon was high as he made his way down to the stream, and cast a milky white glow on the land around him.

As he entered the water, he thought back to his dream. He remembered how his father had told him that such dreams would be the first indication of manhood. Being a man, Gromer was now able to run his own life and make his own decisions. He would no longer be treated as a child. As he lay on the bank drying, he thought about the implications, a jack-o’-lantern’s smile upon his face. Since he was now able to make his own decisions, he decided to search for Allariana. Rather than returning to the cave for his few personal belongings, he decided to leave from where he was. Rising, he headed out into the night, humming a tuneless melody.


Sunrise found Gromer chasing his shadow westward, and putting even more miles between him and his home. Already he was farther than he had ever been, but the country about him looked exactly the same as that of his home miles to the east. He hoped he would soon catch some sign of a decrease in the barrenness and desolation of how homeland, and an increase of plant and animal life that would indicate improved chances of finding one of the People.

The day’s trek was uneventful, save for several minutes spent in midmorning, chasing and catching a scrawny rabbit-like animal that he had stumbled across. Even when picked clean, the animal had provided little to fill him.

It was nearing evening before the terrain finally began to change. The stunted trees and charred undergrowth Gromer was familiar with began to give way to greener, healthier shrubs. He was gladdened by this change.

He angled toward a dense expanse of trees to his left in search of food and shelter — as the orange sun kissed the distant horizon. Having stopped only a handful of times during the day, Gromer wanted badly to rest his sore feet and heavy legs.

He was at the forest’s edge within an hour. It was composed of shriveled, broadleaf trees that could once have been oak or maple. Though somewhat lacking in leaves, the branches formed a dense tangle overhead. Gromer paused at the edge of the forest to allow his eyes to adjust to the gloom — and then crept forward.


She watched him approach the forest on stunted legs, What a curious creature, she thought, he looks like an oversized baby — with his large head and hairless body. He paused a pace or two from the forest’s edge and peered in. She held her breath as his gaze slid past her, a blacker shadow in the darkness. He then stepped forward — startling a squirrel that ran across her foot in its haste to scale a nearby tree. The squirrel had no cause to fear one of the People, for the people loved all animals and did all in their power to protect them. As Gromer wound his way deeper into the forest, she turned to follow on silent feet.

She trailed him by ten paces for the next half hour as he trod his way through the undergrowth disturbing the wildlife. He seemed to have no direction to his travel, though his measdernings took him generally westward and deeper into the forest. After a time, he suddenly stopped. There was a thrashing noise, and she hurried forward in time to see him ready to kill one of her beloved squirrels by apparently biting its head off. Set on preventing the animal’s death, she looked around, seized a nearby stick, and flung it at Gromer’s head.

The stick hit with a resounding thwak, and Gromer was startled into dropping the squirrel. He then spied her a few yards away, and the chase began.

She ran, laughing, just out of his reach — and he struggled, grunting, to catch her. He didn’t notice how she would wait for him to regain his feet when he fell. When she tired of leading him in circles, she turned in the direction of her camp. A few minutes brought them there, as Gromer’s breathing became more heavy and his grunts more frequent.

As they reached the perimeter of the camp, she leaped a trench she had dug to keep away large animals — but he toppled in. He looked up at her in exhausted wonder, as she stood at the edge of the pit nearly doubled over with laughter.

“Well done,” she cried — but then sobered up, though her eyes still smiled. “If you’re that hungry, then have some of these.” She tossed down a pouch of nuts and berries that she carried at her side. He grabbed up the pouch, spilled out its contents, and devoured them by handfuls. When he had finished, he looked up — but she was gone.


“Hello!” She stood again at the edge of the pit as the noon sun angled steeply in. Her blonde hair was pulled back revealing her narrow chin, high cheekbones, and large eyes. She was dressed in green, but her cap had a bright red feather. She looked to be about twelve.

“Hello!” she cried again, and Gromer stirred to find a knotted rope dangling before him.

“It’s so you can climb out.”

She left the edge — and he stood, grabbed the rope, and began to climb. When he reached the top, he found her bent over a cooking pot making some sort of soup.

“My name is Allariana,” she said, “come, have some breakfast.”

Generosity [Classic] (500 word story)

There lived a chipmunk in the sun-baked earth at the edge of a vast forest. His days were spent collecting the fallen acorns from the nearby oak trees. High in the boughs of those very trees, in leafy comfort, lived his cousin the squirrel. Every day the chipmunk would pause in his work and watch the squirrel high overhead going about his incomprehensible business among the green branches where acorns grew for the taking. And every day, the squirrel would look down and see the chipmunk scurrying tiredly to and fro in endless search for whatever the squirrel allowed to fall.

One day, the snow came early, and the chipmunk found his home buried beneath a blanket of white powder. “Please,” he pleaded with the squirrel “allow me to stay with you these few days until the snow melts. For the snow has come early, and has caught me unprepared for the winter.”

The squirrel replied, “Your kind was meant to live in the ground, and so are used to hardships. I have no room for you in my home, and my food is not enough to be shared. It is your fault that you are not prepared for such a snow as this.” And so the chipmunk, after much digging, found his burrow that he had failed to line with fur and twigs, and settled down to wait — with nothing to eat.

Fortunately, the snow melted after only a few days, and the chipmunk — somewhat leaner and somewhat wiser — began lining his burrow, and storing his food for when the snow would come to stay.

And so it happened that lightning struck the forest, and the dead winter trees burnt swiftly to the ground — leaving the squirrel without a home. “Please,” the squirrel pleaded with the chipmunk, “allow me to stay with you until once again the trees grow tall enough to provide me with a home.”

The chipmunk shook his head slowly and, “You would have left me to die when I asked you to share your home. It is only fair that I refuse you my home, as you refused me.”

Just then, a sly fox snuck up and gobbled up the chipmunk. Having heard the conversation, and being wiser than both squirrel and chipmunk, he gave the squirrel his advice. “Life is not a case of clearly distinguishable extremes. As the chipmunk was justified in refusing to share his burrow for the years it would take for new trees to grow, so you too were justified in refusing to share your home with one too lazy to prepare for the slightest of emergencies. However, you would both have done well to be charitable toward each other — and to have shared what you have with one in need.”

With that, the fox gobbled up the squirrel, and settled down in the chipmunk’s now-vacant burrow to wait for spring.

Diagnosis [Classic] (400 word story)

“Well, Doc, I guess it all began about eight years ago when I first started working for Van Narden Labs. Of course, I had the idea of the Transmitter long before then, but Doctor Van Narden was the first to take me seriously. He also saw the commercial and, I believe, the scientific possibilities behind such a machine.

“As you know, the concept of time travel is not new. But it took someone like me, versed in cryogenics and subatomic physics to piece together something that works like the Transmitter. Van Narden seemed to have trouble keeping away from my machine as I neared completing it. He was as excited was, and became considerably preoccupied with the machine as I progressed. 

“This obsession about my machine eventually brought about his unfortunate and untimely demise. Poor follow — they said he walked in front of a truck without looking where he was going.

“He had kept my project a secret — and, because of this, when the review board was reevaluating its funding, it decided that my project was too improbable to continue. They even thought I was insane. Ending my project then would have left me bankrupt. Fortunately, I was able to complete the Transmitter that night — and I guess I’m not insane because if it hadn’t worked, I would not be here talking to you today.

“Wow, I’ve been told that dentists are good listeners. I hope I haven’t bored you with my story. I can see you’re about ready to start drilling. I hope it won’t hurt, because I can’t stand pain.”

With this, he lapsed into silence mixed with uneasiness as the man with the drill came toward him…

“Here is another one,” said the ‘dentist’ as he bandaged the man’s head.

“Thank you for your help, Father,” he said to the Curate who helped him carry the man to the house. “All the poor fellow needs is some rest. Any possession will tire a soul out.”

The Curate nodded, but was thinking otherwise. He had seen too many good Christians die this way to not think there must be a better way to cure a possessed soul. After all, opening the skull to release the evil spirit was not his idea of good medical barbering.

The Gamble [Classic] (450 word story)

It was getting late, and the tourist crowd had departed from the casino — leaving only hand-core gamblers. Usually about this time, I stick with whatever table I find myself at — after an evening of wandering around. Today, it was roulette.

Now roulette is a game which at first seems impossible to beat. Some gambling games are like that, but most seem to require some important decision — such as whether or not to hit in blackjack. With roulette, it appears that wherever one bets — or even if one bets at all — that you will break even at best. It turns out that on American roulette — with two zeros — the bank clears about five and a half dollars on every hundred bet, while European casinos only take three and a half on every hundred because of one less zero.

I’ve always believed in ESP, and I don’t know if that’s entirely it, but some nights — it seems a gambler can’t lose. Tonight was one of those nights, and I was that gambler.

I had some in with two-hundred dollars (a week’s paycheck) and already, I had more than four-hundred fifty dollars profit in addition to my original two-hundred. (This would make up for some weeks when I lost), By gambler’s ethics, I ought to have quit right there — but I felt lucky, and I’ve always been partial to roulette.

I was so confident that I made a bet of 50 dollars on red before my usual preliminary gaging of the tendencies of the wheel that night. It came up 24 black. That’s pretty much the way it went until it had lost down to my original two hundred — and then some. Again, if were playing the game, the way it was supposed be, I should have stopped. But I didn’t.

I put the last of my money — one hundred and seventy five dollars — on 9 red. It wasn’t until he was starting up the wheel that I realized what I had done. 

I was looking to snatch it off, but got one of those feelings that I would be extremely upset if it did come up. So I left it there, and sweated it out. The ball went round and round until it met the wheel, reversed direction, and went around again.

I know what  you’re thinking. That 9 red did come up, and he walked away a rich man. Well you’re wrong. It came up 7 red, and I lost it all — and ended up here on Skid Row with all the other losers in some walk of life or another. I’ve never won a bet since then, and I don’t think I ever will.

Want to bet?

Misguided [Classic] (750 word story)

I think I wrote this in college. Some weirdly autobiographical details, like the main character’s summer job (was what I did). Also, there’s a unfinished poem version of this same story here. Click through to see my theory on how they relate.


His name was George and he was a poet. That is — he liked to think of himself as one. He had always liked poetry, but had only in recent years discovered his talent for writing it. During his sophomore year at college, he had once devoted several weeks to intense writing, both poetry and fiction. He would type from the moment he awoke, until the moment he went to bed — with only occasional breaks for necessities.

He quit finally, when he came to the conclusion that neglecting his studies was not helping his grades. He looked so comical sitting cross-legged on his bed with his typewriter (his desk was too messy to be of use), that his friends had laughingly called him “the Second Cummings” (after the poet E. E. Cummings). He now thought of himself as ‘Second’.

He had written off-and-on that year, and the year after for fun and profit, though there was entirely too much of the former and not nearly enough of the latter. With the desire in mind to remedy the situation, he had decided to get away from it all during the summer between his junior and senior years. He took whatever money he had left from the previous summer (he had worked filling drums of hydrogen peroxide in a chemical warehouse), borrowed a friend’s car, and headed out west toward Wyoming — trying to find the one idea for a novel that would put him in the big time.

This is the story of what happened next.


He walked through the forest and the odor of pine. Around him, the long, straight trunks ended in caps of pine branches high overhead. The ground was flat, though slightly rising — a sharp contrast to the rough, mountainous country he had encountered previously.

The trees were widely spaced, allowing shafts of sunlight to slant in through the cool air. On the ground was a carpet of pine needles and occasional pine cones. High overhead, a raven could be heard, and in the distance, the hoot of an owl.

His clothes were dirty and ripped; his eyes were glassy, his breath came in clouds. His light brown hair hung down, unkempt; this boyish face sprouted several days’ growth of beard.

As he walked, his dragging feet dug uneven furrows in the pine needles. He slipped and began to slide as the ground fell away and sloped steeply down toward a gurgling stream visible through the trees. He scraped his arm on the way down, and came to rest by the side of the stream — his left leg submerged up to the knee.

He awoke some time later, shivering. His eyes focused on the stars twinkling above him. Where am I? he wondered — searching about him in the darkness. He rose to his hands and knees, teeth clenched at the soreness of his body. He coughed several times as he crawled stiffly from the stream. With his head hanging down, he stopped, panting, and tried to think back to how he got here. He remembered vaguely many days of aimless wandering through the pine forest, but before that — nothing.

Who am I?

Cautiosly, he searched his memory. Nothing there but pines and pine cones, occasional copses of gray-white aspen, elk, and days of walking through the cold with nothing to eat.

He had no wallet and no provisions. Rather than retracing his steps, he decided that his best course of action was to travel downstream looking for shelter for the night — and eventually, someone to help him.

He braced himself against a tree and stood up, pausing for his head to clear. He walked slowly downstream searching for a likely spot to spend the night.

He staggered down the street of the small village, his mind delirious with fatigue and hunger. He had travelled for days since the discovery of his amnesia. The ground had generally been dropping, and the air had become thicker and warmer. Finally, he had come across this village nestled in a heavily wooded valley. He had stumbled down into the village, and was now wandering down the main street. There was no one about.

He walked a bit further and collapsed beside the church. Somewhere, a clock struck two.

Second, his mind thought after the clock had rung the second time. His lips moved wordlessly. Second… coming? Of course, the Second Coming: I was sent to separate the bad from the good.

I’ll start tomorrow, he decided as he drifted off to sleep.

That night, he dreamed of angels.


Not sure whether the main character died at the end — one interpretation of the phrase ‘dream of angels’ is someone dying.

Fever [Classic] (750 word story)

“Boy! … Boy!” 

“The lad’s taken ill, sir,” the maid informed Mister Dorken, the master of the house.

“Taken ill? I’ll show him what ill is,” he grumbled, and started up the dark, rickety stairs.

“Oh, please be kind, sir!” the maid called after him.

The miser cursed as he made his way to the decrepit room that he rented — in return for the services of the orphaned boy as hand-servant. He pushed open the lockless door, and peered into the darkness of the dingy bedroom. 

А dark form was on the pallet in the corner. The miser retreated into the hall and took an already-lit lamp down from the wall. He raised the wick to increase the flame and once again entered the room. In the flickering glow of the lamp, he could see the boy tossing and mumbling on his pallet.

“If you’re play-acting, boy, I’ll…” but a closer look revealed the boy’s flushed face glistening with sweat.

The miser cursed for several seconds and, almost in answer to the miser, the boy said in clear voice: “And the winner is Bucknob!” The miser raised an eyebrow to this because Bucknob was the name of an acquaintance’s dog entered in tomorrow’s fights.

“What are you talking about, boy? If you’re faking I’ll…” But the rest of the boy’s utterances were incomprehensible mumblings. The miser heard a noise, and turned to the door to see the maid peering in. She cringed, and pulled back when he looked at her. He headed out, and the maid retreated from his path. “See to him,” he ordered as he started down the stairs.


“Ha!” the miser cried as he entered the door the next evening.

“You’re in good good spirits, sir” the maid said tentatively — ready to retract her statement should the miser not approve.

Instead he replied, “Yes, I won at the fights this night.”

“Congratulations,” the maid said as she took his hat and coat.

“How’s the boy?” he asked.

“Better, sir. He seemed to be sleeping more peacefully the last time I looked in. Would you like me to check again, sir?”

“No, I’ll do it myself.” The miser climbed the stairs and entered the boy’s room. A lamp was already lit in one corner revealing the sleeping boy in another. The boy still looked ill, but the mumbling had stopped.

After a few minutes of waiting followed by several curses, the miser realized that he would probably hear nothing from the boy until he next took ill — and maybe not even then. The miser would visit the druggist tomorrow, he decided.


Due to the drugs that the miser administered every morning, the boy remained in a deep fever for several weeks. He had the boy moved to his own private chambers, and had dismissed the maid. 

The boy’s predictions were not restricted to dog fights, so the miser made money much quicker than he had expected. He congratulated himself on his good fortune in having one such controlled case of prophesy close at hand.

Though the miser was feeding the boy as best he could, after a month and a half, the boy looked so thin and weak that he might pass away from this world.

One day, while debating on whether to awaken the boy and allow him to recuperate on his own — on the chance that another induced fever might give the same results, or to leave the boy be and get what he could out him before he die, the boy gave a shockingly different prophesy. As usual, it was a quote that the miser would hear again in the next 24 hours — “‘I have come back.’”

“What!?” the miser grew angry because only one one prophecy was given each evening, and this evening was wasted on this nonsense. “Why you little…” He rushed toward the boy and it seemed that almost as he touched him, the boy lay dead with a broken neck.

But what did the statement mean? Would the maid come back again? If so, he had better do something about the boy’s body. The miser took the body out to the yard and, by the darkness of the new moon, buried it under a large oak tree. Не then retired to his chambers musing about his misfortune.


The miser was found three days thereafter, his undernourished body nearly disconnected from his head — his face presenting a horrible look of fright. No one could understand how he had become this way, for he had been seen but days before — nor could they explain the gaping hole under the large, now-fallen oak.